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Post by waterpoor on Jul 22, 2011 16:58:16 GMT -5
A Voice-Like My Voice
I hear a voice that might be mine. It is not thunder in a darkened sky nor morning dew dropping from a buttercup. It does not rattle like a falling stone. It calls my name to hear water splash against a fallen tree and wind hum past a blade of grass and hear the flap of an eagles wing. I hear a voice though it is not mine.
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Lily
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Post by Lily on Jul 22, 2011 17:16:32 GMT -5
Oh I like it, Waterpoor. It's evocative and very good.
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Post by amylou on Jul 22, 2011 18:48:12 GMT -5
I enjoyed it too waterpoor. I'm just getting into poetry so I'm no expert, but it's something I've fallen in love with. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for sharing.
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Post by martinshaw on Jul 23, 2011 4:43:46 GMT -5
A Voice-Like My Voice
I hear a voice that might be mine, under thunder of a darkened sky and the stammer of falling stones. It whispers my name to hear waters fall,
from amber cups of morning dew, where humming wind arrows grass, to point to the beat of an eagles wing.
Rude I know, but I liked it and played about
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