A story begun that needs an ending

[annieearthschool]

This is a first draft of a novel... I would appreciate feedback on the structure, the language and the dialogues between the characters. I would like to finish it, but keep thinking of new ways to do this... its driving me crazy!
Its 5000 words so far.

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[The Tourist]

I'd like to help all I can. However, I've tried everything I know of--including a crowbar--to get your file open, but to no available.

Would you like me to PM my e-mail address or loan you a carrier pigeon?