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Post by writer2011 on Jul 30, 2011 11:21:57 GMT -5
OK, I felt in a poetry mood. This time I wanted to play around with words. My vision for this was of course, Alice in Wonderland. I am watching it now and the lines just kept coming to me and I had to create this. It's a mixture of rhyming and non-rhyming which I think may be a no-no, but this was just for fun.
A Vision of Alice and Wonderland
Everything is not, where everything is up. And everything is up, where everything is not. A small bite of cake or bottle of essence Will, surely, put you in a world among the lost.
Have you met the Hatter? He’s madder then the last. And the fuzzy bunny has anxiety attacks.
Roses bleed the river red. And one little misfortune, And it’s “Off with their heads!”
Once, Twice, thrice makes two steps back Now let’s count back. One: Jaberwalkies don’t exist Two: shimmers of purple disappear quicker than last. Was I going mad or was that the cat? Thrice, makes three slashes to victory!
-Margaret Compeau
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raemorgan
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Post by raemorgan on Jul 30, 2011 15:24:47 GMT -5
I like it. Being a big fan of Alice helps. What a verse.
"Roses bleed the river red. And one little misfortune, And it’s “Off with their heads!”
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Post by writer2011 on Jul 31, 2011 8:56:41 GMT -5
Thanks!
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