lane
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Post by lane on May 24, 2012 22:30:00 GMT -5
I call this little writes statements, things at the end of a day or during the day.
Come closer, do you think of me in your Winter rains, grays touch the ocean.
Come sit, my hands are warm merely empty.
I reminisce, incidental moments remind me....you too? the paths we walked are the same I`m sure, void of our impressions.
Do you think of me when the rains fall? it`s been so long...
Well better go, rain is passing. Thought you might like to know I think of you..
Rain is that way sometimes.
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The wood has grayed many years of weather, fighting Winter, July boils, and the rain. Comfort on the old back-steps twisted some, but sturdy.
Dark clouds move across lighter shades, or is it the world moving around charcoal splashes. Rain..doesn`t it seem searing at times.
I fought the day to bring me here, the cold minutes spent alone... no one to watch the rain.
"question my abilities..never my heart"
© Copyright 2011 Vincent ===============
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Post by greenwriter on May 25, 2012 14:04:37 GMT -5
I like this, it has the right amount of nostalgia and pathos.
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Lily
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Post by Lily on Aug 22, 2012 15:22:34 GMT -5
Bittersweet...lovely words and sentiments.
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