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Post by waterpoor on Jul 24, 2011 15:20:40 GMT -5
Footprints of An Old Guy
Lava stones sprout thorny mesquite bushes where I sit listening to raven wings pound decibels into the air. Their wake stirs dusty pasts which swirl through juniper trees to demand my attention. Was that my youth that danced in Montana meadows and later ducked the ugly screams of mortars while watching men die violent deaths? Was it me who marveled at the purple hew of my second born squeezing his way into his own new world? Have I left a footprint somewhere other than this breezy ridge that marks a trek across my soul and when seen will it contain enough humanity to cover blood stains?
Coyotes sit beside my father’s grave and howl at the glowing coals of a rising moon. I hear his voice, still steady, still calm. “Walk strong my son, walk strong.” As the voice fades I climb down the hill to face days yet to come. I can see them, though not quite before they fade.
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Lily
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Post by Lily on Jul 24, 2011 16:41:55 GMT -5
That's great, Waterpoor. It evokes such lucid images -- moments from a life.
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Post by bubblegum91 on Jul 26, 2011 5:51:55 GMT -5
That was pretty cool. I had to google a word or two, lol. But I could really see the images you painted.
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Post by waterpoor on Aug 5, 2011 12:14:45 GMT -5
Thanks bubblegum for the read. Appreciated as always.
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Post by influential on Aug 6, 2011 13:42:41 GMT -5
wow, this was a powerful one here. the way you wrote this was like you painted on a canvas. I could imagine every single word in my head. simply perfect.
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pariah
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Post by pariah on Aug 6, 2011 18:32:39 GMT -5
Very nice prose waterpoor.
Beautifully crafted.
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Post by waterpoor on Aug 14, 2011 22:37:06 GMT -5
influential and pariah
Thanks to both of you for thr reads and comments. They are well appreciated. R.
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