avery
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Post by avery on Jul 18, 2011 19:29:33 GMT -5
Where did you come from my lovely one? A little masked bandit that romps and runs; Appeared on my porch one moonlit night With shiny nose and eyes so bright.
Into this poisoned urban mess That sprawls and kills and never rests; You brought the mystery of the forest floor And the ancient world beyond our door.
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Post by martinshaw on Jul 19, 2011 2:23:30 GMT -5
Yeah, it's quirky.
Second stanza needs sorting.
And the mystery of the forest floor is?
Great to read you again.
Best
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zoe
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Post by zoe on Jul 19, 2011 5:43:54 GMT -5
I know that one, he used to invade out backyard when we lived in Cali I love the flow of this piece
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avery
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Post by avery on Feb 10, 2012 19:15:19 GMT -5
The Poetry corner is a cool idea. I must rake up some of my old poems.
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