Richard
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Post by Richard on Jul 23, 2011 13:03:00 GMT -5
Illuminate your mind
See yourself behind
A sudden impulse brings
Dark days to brighter things
Optimistic philosophy
Thru caring eyes you see
Persistent thoughts will breed
Animated soliloquy
From a different period of my life.
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Post by amylou on Jul 23, 2011 21:00:54 GMT -5
Very beautiful Richard, thanks for sharing! I really enjoyed reading this.
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Post by waterpoor on Jul 24, 2011 13:55:54 GMT -5
Richard I like the style, no wasted words, no esoteric bull dookey. Nice writing. R.
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Lily
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Post by Lily on Jul 24, 2011 13:58:45 GMT -5
"A sudden impulse brings Dark days to brighter things" Love it. Great poem, Richard
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Richard
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Post by Richard on Jul 24, 2011 14:36:57 GMT -5
Appreciate the replies.
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