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Awave
Sept 12, 2013 17:40:19 GMT -5
Post by south4thesummer on Sept 12, 2013 17:40:19 GMT -5
Everything brings me back to you you're beaten into my thoughts like metal pounded thin and hot.
I'm watching that stray black cat playing sentry for the evening. The walls are his parapets his orange-aura'd shadow cast long on the iron-wrought gate. A plane flies low and its busy engines throb through the earth. His thin simulacrum cocks its head.
I've felt it in my feet and recall that vacation on the coast in a crowded bookstore when the ground became awave beneath me. Books startled from their nests were ruffled and disgruntled as geese. Silly, awkward things.
I was steady as a stone in the panic somehow unsurprised. Because there was a moment when you touched me just with the tiniest tips of your fingers and a pit opened under me to swallow me whole.
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marcel
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Awave
Sept 12, 2013 17:48:25 GMT -5
Post by marcel on Sept 12, 2013 17:48:25 GMT -5
Wonderful as always. You should publish your poems on Createspace/Amazon.
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Awave
Sept 14, 2013 20:51:30 GMT -5
Post by jacklawson on Sept 14, 2013 20:51:30 GMT -5
Ditto, what Marcel said. Good stuff.
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kelly
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Awave
Sept 17, 2013 2:02:13 GMT -5
Post by kelly on Sept 17, 2013 2:02:13 GMT -5
Great. as always.
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