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Post by south4thesummer on Aug 29, 2013 16:11:30 GMT -5
Even the bleeding red desert so absolute bends to this heat. The forsaken air is alive with it heavy with it. Wildly my heart throws itself against its cage of ribs. Feral animal- full of fever- caught a taste of freedom. The thirsty earth swallows words as I say them, forcing a silence so full I fear the eggshell sky might crack.
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skyelar
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Post by skyelar on Aug 30, 2013 1:47:40 GMT -5
I love this. Well done. Beautiful imagery 'bleeding red desert.'
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Post by south4thesummer on Sept 12, 2013 17:39:22 GMT -5
Thanks! I live in the desert, and sometimes it really feels like that.
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kelly
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Post by kelly on Sept 17, 2013 2:03:02 GMT -5
Lovely imagery and a very special way with words.
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Post by butterscotch on Sept 19, 2013 11:33:58 GMT -5
Luv it.
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skyelar
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Post by skyelar on Sept 21, 2013 12:35:22 GMT -5
Me too.
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greg
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Post by greg on Sept 24, 2013 13:13:15 GMT -5
Excellent!
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