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Post by south4thesummer on Nov 26, 2011 8:25:26 GMT -5
I used to dream of a hundred acres, A stream, a cabin. Of coldest winters and lazy summers. A wraparound porch with a rocker and a cold glass of water. A person I have never met With a smile like a storm breaking. I imagined hands well worn and a quilt softer than sleep, Grass that turned gold in the fall, An ocean of green, A field of snow. I wished for a blank white page and the adventure of the everyday; To wake when I felt like it and sleep when I wanted. But dreams fall faster than flies And I know what I cannot have.
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Lily
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Post by Lily on Nov 26, 2011 14:36:57 GMT -5
I think this is very very good. I'm sure we can all relate to the sentiments. In essence, dreams are just a figment of our imagination, they don't work well when we attempt to transport them into the real world. Welcome to the forum.
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Post by artfulhelix on Feb 3, 2012 20:52:12 GMT -5
I agree with lily, very good! Dreams are just that dreams.
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oracle
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Post by oracle on Jul 26, 2012 18:39:14 GMT -5
Good poem.
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