irondoll
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Post by irondoll on Oct 1, 2013 22:55:59 GMT -5
I've written something on wattpad today and it's called "Five days". It's just a little snippet of a story that I plan to write and publish soon. If you're a member of wattpad, maybe you could check it out and let me know what you think just from those first few paragraphs that I published. Hope to hear from your comments. Thank you. Here's a link just in case. www.wattpad.com/26634084-five-days |
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greg
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Post by greg on Oct 1, 2013 23:41:48 GMT -5
I thought it had real potential. Well done.
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irondoll
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Post by irondoll on Oct 2, 2013 1:19:05 GMT -5
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. Much appreciated sir.
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susieq
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Post by susieq on Oct 4, 2013 12:07:40 GMT -5
I liked it too. Good story.
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irondoll
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Post by irondoll on Oct 4, 2013 23:58:56 GMT -5
Good to hear that you liked it, thank you so much.
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Post by jacklawson on Oct 5, 2013 0:57:59 GMT -5
I liked it too. Keep up the good work.
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irondoll
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Post by irondoll on Oct 5, 2013 1:34:51 GMT -5
You guys are awesome. Thank you. ;D
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irondoll
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Post by irondoll on Oct 5, 2013 13:21:40 GMT -5
You guys have been awesome. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work, it is greatly appreciated. I listened to some of your comments and suggestions and made some changes. Hope you like it and please vote if you like it. I finished the 2nd part and I plan to publish it as soon as I get at least 5 votes. Comments are welcome as well. Thanks again. www.wattpad.com/26634084-five-days |
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skyelar
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Post by skyelar on Oct 5, 2013 16:23:16 GMT -5
Very suspenseful. I think I'd make the main character male.
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Post by greenwriter on Oct 7, 2013 22:48:14 GMT -5
I liked it too. And yes the lead character should be male.
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irondoll
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Post by irondoll on Oct 7, 2013 23:20:27 GMT -5
Awesome. Thank you so much. I will definitely put that under consideration as I progress with the story. ;D
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avery
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Post by avery on Oct 8, 2013 13:52:50 GMT -5
Good luck with the story. I think it's very good.
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Post by marcel on Oct 9, 2013 15:18:24 GMT -5
I liked the story so far. Looking forward to reading the rest of it.
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irondoll
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Post by irondoll on Oct 9, 2013 23:29:14 GMT -5
Thank you so much Marcel and Avery. You're comments really mean a lot to me.
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